Wanna play a game?
He asks
holding out some cards,
its really fun, try and see.
A week passes,
a month,
a year,
hes still addicted to the game.
A new group of friends are found, with this
kids new hobby.
Life passes by,
always thinking about
The Game.
He showed this kid the game,
now the kid beats the tutor.
1)like everything else i write, this sounds very choppy, what do you think?
2)anything else that could help? I'm horrible at poetry. :P
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I don't think it sounds to choppy. I think it's pretty good. You might want to maybe use more imagery I think. Sorry that probably doesn't really help.
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